Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!
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