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Review Detail of LostEra in Worldwide Beasttaming: I Can Design Evolution Lines

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the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny

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