Review Detail of Thesilverderp in Versatile System Online
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First chapter starts off very strong in terms of intrigue and writing, but gradually gets worse as you read further. By chapter 3, it’s down to the level of most shi tty webnovel novels in terms of grammar, sentence structure, and dialogue, which is a real shame. I might check out the authors next novel, but I can’t continue this.
Versatile System Online
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Well, I get what you mean. The first chapter is wholly rewritten by me when I was writing for a long time. The others aren't edited and as for the writing quality not being up to par; its cuz those chapters were written when I just started. I will edit them later and put a note in the description too. Furthermore, I say you read atleast the free chapters and then tell me as the writing and story gets better.
PRO_GAMER_2345:Well, I get what you mean. The first chapter is wholly rewritten by me when I was writing for a long time. The others aren't edited and as for the writing quality not being up to par; its cuz those chapters were written when I just started. I will edit them later and put a note in the description too. Furthermore, I say you read atleast the free chapters and then tell me as the writing and story gets better.
I appreciate it. I can assure you that it gets better. Also, no worries about time. Everyone is short of time, so you taking out time for the book is something I will be grateful for.
Thesilverderp:I might, I don't have a lot of free time anymore