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Wheeler4784
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While I want to give it five stars it felt like that awkward tension NTR gives you when Chiron did it with Drake. I dropped it there not going to lie I feel like it's probably a one time thing but that scene kind of ruined the novel for me.

One Piece: Wild Hunt

Einlion

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Ladre_9131
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After reading these comments I see where everyone is coming from. To be honest when I started reading this after the situation with Drake I find it hard to continue the story as well. For me I recognize that it was not an NTR situation but it felt like the author wanted to rub the potential of a love interest in this guy's face and then completely break his spirit. Knowing that he is stuck on this ship and have to live with these people. So it felt more to me like he was going for emotional damage more so than specifically NTR even though the entire situation felt NTR ish which I'm sure the author is well aware of. After reading this part of the story I came to the understanding that the author may intend to write a story where the MC is humiliated by the people around him while he is weak and maybe when he gets stronger their attitudes may change but I've seen this trope so very often in Japanese literature that it's become kind of sickening at this point. Not saying that I expect the MC to be hardcore or badass from the start but I get tired of seeing male MCs come into these worlds and have zero self respect or completely going with the flow with everything that's done to them whether they like it or not. Also anyone that knows the Fate verse could tell by the author's choice of females to put around the MC that he was not going to be treated well and to have the only guy other than him on the ship bang the girl he was working his ass off to get right after showing up. Only to then not only have it rubbed in his face by the woman but he also had to endure the BRO pep talk from the guy that screwed him in the first place. I had to drop it after this point. The type of humiliation the author chooses for this guy will definitely make men uncomfortable. I don't know if the guy will eventually get laid but to me I don't think it's worth being treated like that just to maybe get some affection. I'm not just talking about Drake, I did read a bit more and the thing with Artemis is just pathetic. Any man that gets stronger like that will always be a BETA male no matter how strong he gets. Sorry for the rant.

Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

There is no NTR though.

Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv12Wheeler4784

Yeah but you were setting up Drake as a love interest in the first few chapters and she basically promises herself to mc if he can grow strong enough and like a week later she does it with Chiron. It's not explicitly NTR but it feels like it.

Einlion:There is no NTR though.
Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv12Wheeler4784

Not to mention the fact that afterwards she blatantly and purposely shoves it in the MC's face.

Wheeler4784:Yeah but you were setting up Drake as a love interest in the first few chapters and she basically promises herself to mc if he can grow strong enough and like a week later she does it with Chiron. It's not explicitly NTR but it feels like it.
Anastaxius
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She's the cover of the novel so I thought she would be FMC, felt uncomfortable reading the chap but apparently that's just how she is (I know nothing about fate).

Einlion:There is no NTR though.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

I have never set Drake up as the love interest. In fact, I went out of my way to explain that she's a hedonistic libertine that would never enter a committed relationship. What are you smoking?

Wheeler4784:Yeah but you were setting up Drake as a love interest in the first few chapters and she basically promises herself to mc if he can grow strong enough and like a week later she does it with Chiron. It's not explicitly NTR but it feels like it.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

She is one of the main characters. You do realize it's possible to have heroines in a novel that aren't slaves to the male lead, right?

Anastaxius:She's the cover of the novel so I thought she would be FMC, felt uncomfortable reading the chap but apparently that's just how she is (I know nothing about fate).
ZA_WARUDO_
ZA_WARUDO_Lv3ZA_WARUDO_

I haven't read it but I agree to the guy. She promises to be his if he gets strong enough, that's setting them up tho right?

Einlion:I have never set Drake up as the love interest. In fact, I went out of my way to explain that she's a hedonistic libertine that would never enter a committed relationship. What are you smoking?
ZA_WARUDO_
ZA_WARUDO_Lv3ZA_WARUDO_

But I would like one that wouldn't go around sleeping with men like that and, according to the guy, shoves it in his face.

Einlion:She is one of the main characters. You do realize it's possible to have heroines in a novel that aren't slaves to the male lead, right?
ZA_WARUDO_
ZA_WARUDO_Lv3ZA_WARUDO_

Thank you for helping me dodge a bullet though just this tiny mention of Ntr irks me a bit.

Wheeler4784:Not to mention the fact that afterwards she blatantly and purposely shoves it in the MC's face.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

There is no mention of NTR, as there is NO NTR.

ZA_WARUDO_:Thank you for helping me dodge a bullet though just this tiny mention of Ntr irks me a bit.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

Double standards have no place in a world of pirates. Drake is a libertine who doesn't believe in the concept of things like marriage or committed relationships. She believes people should be free, so if she finds a guy she likes, she takes 'them' home, not the other way around. It is never implied that she would 'become' someone the MC can simply possess. That isn't how the real world works, man.

ZA_WARUDO_:But I would like one that wouldn't go around sleeping with men like that and, according to the guy, shoves it in his face.
Thehighesthol1
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Ne ne Will he be related to the drake in the future?

Einlion:There is no mention of NTR, as there is NO NTR.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

It genuinely doesn't matter. People can have more than a single relationship throughout their life. If you believe virgin women are the only valid women, there's something wrong with your head.

Thehighesthol1:Ne ne Will he be related to the drake in the future?
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1Thehighesthol1

there is nothing wrong with our heads but bro, in NTR right in front of the face who is willing? you want in the real world like that?

Einlion:It genuinely doesn't matter. People can have more than a single relationship throughout their life. If you believe virgin women are the only valid women, there's something wrong with your head.
ZA_WARUDO_
ZA_WARUDO_Lv3ZA_WARUDO_

Well, is this the real world? Didn't think so.

Einlion:Double standards have no place in a world of pirates. Drake is a libertine who doesn't believe in the concept of things like marriage or committed relationships. She believes people should be free, so if she finds a guy she likes, she takes 'them' home, not the other way around. It is never implied that she would 'become' someone the MC can simply possess. That isn't how the real world works, man.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

If you think this is a genuine point, you need a mental health check. The fact that it's 'fiction' gives it even more freedom than reality. What kind of point are you trying to make? Did you even think before you typed out your response?

ZA_WARUDO_:Well, is this the real world? Didn't think so.
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1Thehighesthol1

Just a suggestion, I think normal men will try to stay away from their partners if there is evidence of infidelity. Unless there's a strange fetish

Einlion:If you think this is a genuine point, you need a mental health check. The fact that it's 'fiction' gives it even more freedom than reality. What kind of point are you trying to make? Did you even think before you typed out your response?
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

Yes, I know. I'm not arguing against that. In fact, I've pointed out SEVERAL TIMES that the MC and Drake aren't in a relationship. If you see your ex or a random woman at a bar and she goes home with another man, did you get c*cked? No, you didn't. You need to be in an active, committed relationship for cheating to occur.

Thehighesthol1:Just a suggestion, I think normal men will try to stay away from their partners if there is evidence of infidelity. Unless there's a strange fetish
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1Thehighesthol1

well you know how good friend.

Einlion:Yes, I know. I'm not arguing against that. In fact, I've pointed out SEVERAL TIMES that the MC and Drake aren't in a relationship. If you see your ex or a random woman at a bar and she goes home with another man, did you get c*cked? No, you didn't. You need to be in an active, committed relationship for cheating to occur.
Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

????

Thehighesthol1:well you know how good friend.