Review Detail of Trafford in Hadrian Peverell in Hellboy

Story-wise, the plot and ideas are good. The fanfic has a nice pretext, and you rarely see the Hellbody fanfics, even though they are crossovers It's a shame that this fanfic already has too many crossovers within it... Hellboy itself is a very large universe of shitton of comics already... The bad thing is that... the story is absolutely unreadable... the grammar, stylization, divisions of the text into paragraphs, punctuations, capitalizations of the letters, and so on... is way worse than MTL.