The story line is really interesting, but I couldn't flow well at a point due to not understanding the next action. I get to understand the the creator existence. You have a good story to be candid. Keep it up.
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Friends, accepting your suggestions for changes to give more clarity to the novel. It has been edited: ⦁ The synopsis. In the Auxiliary volume: ⦁ Structure: Academy AP ⦁ 3R Writing Technique ⦁ Prologue: Who is an anti-hero? The Titles and content of Volume 1 : Arc 1: The Antihero 1. From a barren heart, he is born out of love, a social leader. 2. The first King of humanity: discarded. 3. A Shepherd of sheep with gifts of antihero 4. The glory of the people transferred... 5. The Masters of evil... 6. Up to here the Creator helped us... Thank you for a second review or reading, commenting: The improvement.
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