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Otacon88
Otacon88Lv141yrOtacon88

The concept is cool but the story is slow and there’s a lot of long boring explanations which are sometime repeated to increase word count… otherwise it could become a fun story

I Have A Cultivation World

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Unit29
Unit29Lv3Unit29

Generally, it is single word repeating for emphasis. However, it is also for major statements as reinforcement of an issue. It's the second one that is annoying, because it can mean seeing the same paragraph repeated frequently...

Namasaya:I think you're referencing when they say a single word multiple times like good good good versus when they're literally repeating the same explanation across various different chapters. they're not simultaneously being said the same time. like in this story up to chapter 26 I believe They have explained the different spirit root system at least four or five times now and pretty badly each time
Unit29
Unit29Lv3Unit29

It's not really for word count, but just a cultural thing that was directly translated, instead of being deleted. Shows up best in Chinese translatios. Often a repetition of three times is considered the highest honor, etc... It honors nothing and is just annoying as he'll for everyone else.

Namasaya
NamasayaLv15Namasaya

I think you're referencing when they say a single word multiple times like good good good versus when they're literally repeating the same explanation across various different chapters. they're not simultaneously being said the same time. like in this story up to chapter 26 I believe They have explained the different spirit root system at least four or five times now and pretty badly each time

Unit29:It's not really for word count, but just a cultural thing that was directly translated, instead of being deleted. Shows up best in Chinese translatios. Often a repetition of three times is considered the highest honor, etc... It honors nothing and is just annoying as he'll for everyone else.
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unusualbliss
unusualblissLv3unusualbliss

Yup it's too drawn out and boring even before reaching chapter 20