Review Detail of Sword_1mmortal in I Have A Cultivation World

Item: I Have A Cultivation World
Rating: 2

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Sword_1mmortalLv131yrSword_1mmortal

It's a normal modern cultivation setting. Schools focus on cultivation and students work hard to cultivate to higher levels to get into good colleges. It's a meh, only thing I don't like is the cultivation progress of the mc. I must admit, I may have been spoilt by the many trial reads of fast paced cultivation. But dude, this guy was level 5 qi refinement at ch 1 and 20 chapters later he's still at the same level. Overall the story is uninteresting and I practically skimmed the whole 20 chapters and only saw that there were not that much of a change in mc's progress. At most he focused on learning talisman and improving his spirit root's attribute

I Have A Cultivation World

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CringeLv5Cringe

You just like fast paced novels. Expecting him to immediately start breaking through after entering the treasure is unrealistic and would just be boring. Plus he already broke through before the series started which is why he spends time stabilizing his realm

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WhorumanLv4Whoruman

Not true, you are too used to fast paced novels. the first 50 chapters focus more on the world building and characters before going more deeply into the MC's cultivation journey.

1yr

NamasayaLv15Namasaya

I get that they're not going to break through continuously but the way he's describing stuff is so ugly boring at least up to chapter 26 that it's going to be a hard stop for a lot of people I'm going to keep on getting through this or get to chapter 50 and see if it improves but if you are trying to entice readers with the first 20 or 30 chapters of your book say space out the explanations like you can't have them all crammed into the first few chapters people don't like to read exposition all the time

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