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Review Detail of Astralek in I Received System to Become Dragonborn

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Astralek
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First off, the title is very deceptive. The Author used the term 'Dragonborn' to draw in people thinking it'd be linked to The Elder Scrolls. It isn't. It's a sh*tty cliche ridden story with as much creativity and depth to it as a five year old's crayon drawing. The Protagonist is a insufferable fool with no spine, there is no proper world building or background AT ALL, and it uses so many tropes that if this novel were a building it would be foreclosed then bulldozed. One of the examples is how the protagonist supposedly was fighting on the front lines against the Elves for five years, witnessing the deaths of many friends and fellow humans but he fell in love at first sight with a Elven Princess from the race that murdered millions of Humans in an unprovoked war of aggression. Not only that but the Princess of the Elves somehow knew that he was the system user, teleported to him then then betrayed her race by telling him about an upcoming attack on that city simply because she felt his magic dragon transformation due to her super special secret talent and desperarely wanted his dragon c*ck-*cough* I mean dragon magic. Even worse is how Erend is STILL an incompetant coward that shakes in his boots and freezes up when the Elves attack after five years of fighting on the frontline. He even gets shouted at to remind him to shoot at the enemy in the first chapter! 2/5 Stars.

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I Received System to Become Dragonborn

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IHateDao
IHateDaoLv13IHateDao

I think worst part is system , how he lvl up and daily quest that is not daily and only happen for the sake of plot

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

so another fake op mc. they need to add a rating system for authors. so anyone that uses fake tags can have that marked on their account