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Its just boring.. i stopped halfway through chapter 8, because its just exactly the same as the original. The mc doesn’t add anything to the story at all to the point where you can remove the mc from the story and almost nothing changes. Everything rimuru did in the original he still does in this fanfic so its not like the mc took his place. She is litteraly there for decoration. At an early stage she is ridiculously op, but i don’t have a problem with that. The thing i do have a problem with is the fact that even though she has so much power she just follows the exact same plot. I dont know if this changes later, but this is what i think of the story in the first 8 chapters.

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I actually agree with this. it's quite boring early on. I tried to change it later on though with the differences varying.