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    Rick Sanchez energy

    "As if my mind is weak enough to have some person talking about feelings influence it, besides, I'm perfect."
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    slimes can absorb toxins

    Great sage: {Warning, critical damage done. Accessing possibilities for survival... found.
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    I will, it will just take a lot of time

    Ch 15 I am sorry.
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    Replied to TRUE_R_O_B

    Yep, peak tier 1 if not low tier 0

    Ch -1 0. Status (potential spoilers)
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    This is my personal review of my story. The writing quality to ok at best. I am new to this so I expected it to be this bad. There aren't many typos but the wiring structure is terrible. The story development so far is bad, but that is to be expected because it is the early arcs of Tensura. It will 100% at least get a bit better in later arcs when I go into the wn. Character design is basically the same as Tensura, just Munuru is added. Munuru is unnecessarily op, much more than the op of Tensura. Updating stability is bad, I take very long breaks when I do and at this moment if chapter 19 I am sick so It will be varied. World background right now is bad, but in future chapters it will be revealed why I put it at 4 stars. You can decide to read this if you want but don't expect much. I will be doing a remake of this, just without the unnecessary opness. There will also be sequels with better overall reviews.

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    Forgot to add this but this story is basically just the base for future stories, so it is meant to be quite bland with an overly overpowered mc

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    Replied to Robert_Thompson97

    That's what I am going to do! Thanks for the review and I totally agree. I personally like op MCs especially since it fits with tensura but I went quite overboard. I think I have stated before that I am going to rewrite the story without [Gods will]. You can leave if you want or wait until the remake when I will 1. be a better writer 2. characters will have more expression 3. The MC will fit the scaling of Tensura.

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    Replied to Crimson_D3mon

    Understandable. The story is very bland, even now. She will travel to stronger worlds and eventually a custom made world, so hopefully the story will get less bland. There are going to be multiple sequels with better quality after a while. Thank you for trying to read the story

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    Replied to Umbriel

    Sorry no, but there are going to be many sequels. After this book is finished I will start another one but I will make 50 chapters before posting the first chap so I can keep it consistent. There are going to be sequels but the mc's aren't going to be Munuru, like I said in the synopsis there are going to be multiple different worlds. My idea is that I am going to create a sort of omniverse and outerverse, but I'm going to stop here, I don't want to spoil the whole thing.

    Ch 17 17. The final stage of power
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    Replied to oobess

    I'm thinking about it. I already have all of the plot set out but I may add this in.

    Ch 17 17. The final stage of power
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    Replied to omnigamergt

    🤔🤔🤔

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    Replied to TheXeno

    I've got a release date. 4th November

    Ch 16 ...
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    Replied to TheXeno

    Haha, sorry about that. I will be releasing a date for when I come back and release the next chap in a few days.

    Ch 16 ...
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    Replied to WistRal

    I meant it haha

    Hey, here's the newest chap. Just a warning, Munuru is going to get VERY OP VERY FAST from now.
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    Replied to JustAlitleShadow

    Really? It should be correct since to get -ab you need to multiply a and b. Since -a and -b are added then they should be separated along with -ab and a^2

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    Replied to Sp4de

    Emi did a scan of all of the students and told Munuru. Also because of Investigator Munuru can see all past events no matter what. Emi scanned for events about Chloe and found Chronoa.

    I think Rimuru is doing this to gain their trust. I mean, what other reason would you have to best down on kids? I mean, they ignored Rimuru until he threatened them with Ranga. I wonder why Chloe got scared, isn't she Chronoa or something? Maybe Chronoa needs to be summoned to give Chloe her memories.
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    Replied to JustAlitleShadow

    Maybe a chap in an hour

    This was updated to tell you that chapter 14 may be coming in 1-3 hours or tomorrow. I will also begin to upload a chapter every 3 days.
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    Replied to WolffunTW

    Yeah I'm ok. I'm just taking a day break

    Ch 13 13. Yuuki Kagurazaka
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    Replied to HankTheFisherMan

    I actually agree with this. it's quite boring early on. I tried to change it later on though with the differences varying.

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    Replied to CORINTHIANS1910

    Hahahaha, soon it will be plain but don't expect it to be too soon

    1.9x10^1229 in a second.
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