Review Detail of YoungSnipe in Eldritch Creature's Guide

Honestly the overall story and plot is quite good, and the world building and background is also intriguing. However the author seriously needs an editor, like it is so annoying to read I couldn’t get past the first 10 chapters even though the premise is so interesting. It’s really a pity. Like the repetition is real like it seems like at least half of the chapter is filler to just bring up the world count. Overall it’s a 3.8 from me chief.