Review Detail of Christian_Mojica in The Gods Fear- Lucifer

The author repeatedly seems to be breaking the forth wall to inform the reader "i believe i know what you're thinking, but this is what actually happened". In the case of Deadpool, it would be humorous since it is weeved into the essence of action scenes and it comes at climatic moments, but the author here seems to address the audience when ever a new scene is about to approach, much like if someone was telling a story to a gathering of children telling them "No Timmy, what I am about to tell you is not what you're thinking" rather than actually writing a narrative that invokes and reels the reader into the world they are now traveling into like: "floating gently on the gleaming lake, the last golden swan rested motionless with its beady eyes darting across the lake's white sandy banks. Every once in a while it would dive out of sight when a twig snapped, fearing that another hunter's spear would meet its mark. Its feathers ruffled just at the thought of its mate who had been impaled a few nights ago."