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Vishal_Meliodus

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Enjoy going on a journey and experiencing everything that each character goes through https://www.webnovel.com/book/lahrin-i-will-never-lose-her-again--the-king-of-gods_23879176306238705

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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Trafford

    Thank you, glad you liked it

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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Posted

    I am new to this Cultivation type novel , but i loved how the author used some gems power and clones to defeat the gods of universe, i liked the idea and mostly i liked how gods of all universe fear a single man, its always nice to see something like that, over all good work, writing style is easy to understand...thanks for this story [img=recommend]

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    Immortal Supreme: Sovereign of the Grand Dao
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Posted

    While you give a review kindly use full english, dont use special characters like !, :, ; even .......dots like this are restricted, so kindly if you are going to give review give in full english without any extra symbols

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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Ruby_banks02

    Thanks, i will try to upload many chapters and thanks again for spending your time to give this review

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    The Demi-Human With Blood Magic
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Posted

    I loved the way the author started the story, titles given to each chapter are good and it tells exactly what that chapter is, i loved how this work used the sounds perfectly, it felt real once u start imagining, over all good work, keep going, best luck [img=recommend]

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    Arya: A Life, A Quest
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to 1stDaoistOfReading

    thank you very much, lol Sorry for the dramatic finish, but I grew up hearing stories from my grandparents, and they frequently ended stories like this, haha, but this is what makes the story intriguing.

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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to yasuramaru_sama

    its not only about important character, u will see pov of every single one., thanks for your review

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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Posted

    Nice, if you love this genre i suggest you reading this, keep going, good luck[img=recommend][img=recommend], waiting for more chapters, you still have lot of potential, so i expect an improvement in future updates.

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    moved to wsa
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Knetti1990
    Gandalf suddenly screamed, and Jaguara burst out laughing. One of the babies in Gandalf's arms yanked his hair and laughed at him, and Gandalf replied with a smile, "Do you want to play with grandpa, ho ho ho?"
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    The Demi-Human With Blood Magic
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Little_North_Star

    Thanks, you will see even more interesting characters and plot in future updates

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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
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    lol, in the olden days, walking naked to bathe in the river was not uncommon, plus he is staying outside of the settlement where there are no humans, so...

    Gandalf suddenly screamed, and Jaguara burst out laughing. One of the babies in Gandalf's arms yanked his hair and laughed at him, and Gandalf replied with a smile, "Do you want to play with grandpa, ho ho ho?"
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    The Demi-Human With Blood Magic
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Commented

    blue blue came twice

    Two girls, which he guessed were his own age, were talking leisurely on a bench in the courtyard, enjoying the warm summer sun shining in the blue-blue sky.
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    The Winged Heart
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Commented

    nice imagination.[img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Teaser
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    The Winged Heart
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Christian_Mojica

    Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment; yeah, I broke the fourth wall, but everything you've read thus far is just an introduction; the main tale has yet to begin.

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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Posted

    The way POV changing is a unique style, and personally i loved how you gave a detail background for every event, so far good, i expect more upcoming chapters... you can make this work into master piece with little more effort.[img=recommend]

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    Beyond The Seas
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Commented

    twi times u used the name

    The bus soon came to a stop and we started alighting. I work for a factory called Builders. Unlike the name the name, we don't build houses and other things that can be built. But we make basic tools like axe, spade and local construction materials, or atleast that's what we were told.
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Commented

    good start, i expect more upcoming chapters

    Ch 1 The First Step
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Commented

    i like this line.[img=recommend]

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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Enigma21

    here the idea is not about forgiving, it is basically like we are alone with a girl we like, but cant do anything lol

    You might be thinking right now that Rin and I made a wonderful gesture by walking in the forest while holding hands tightly. Sincerely, I also wish that were the case. Let's face it, she is the one I love, so there is nothing wrong with expecting a romantic gesture. The reality, though, can be harsh.
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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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  • Vishal_Meliodus
    Vishal_Meliodus1yr
    Replied to Enigma21

    This unique notion is not intended to resemble a story; rather, it is intended to resemble our actual thoughts. If you have noticed, our minds process everything and provide comments; nevertheless, no comments are linked to one another; they just follow the order of events that occurred.

    "You're being made fun of for bringing a girl into the forest and then talk about protecting her". Although I accept your anger, we arranged this journey for a reason. You must be aware of Rin's identity if you would like to know the cause.
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    The Gods Fear- Lucifer
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