13 chaps in. Mild *SPOILERS* A rich world is slowly being built and the magic system is similarly introduced bit by bit. So no massive info dumps, a big plus from me. The magic system has enormous potential and it is both rather simple and complex. There are aspects of other more common magic systems present, like spell proficiency and ‘magic power’ but they have their own newer advantages and drawbacks which is rather refreshing. Spells don’t need a chant or a mana circle or something like that, just imagination. It’s extremely versatile. Recently, a self-created status panel has been introduced to help keep track of progress. So it’s much easier to see how much MC has grown. So far the MC has shown himself to be intelligent and cautious, so you can expect to not bang your head on the wall at the stupidity of decisions. Other characters don’t seem 1-D and the dialogue isn’t unrealistic (in the confines of a fantasy world ofc). In terms of writing quality, there have been minimal mistakes and the ones that do pop up don’t really affect the experience, I don’t really notice them tbh. The Author’s other book, The Oracle Paths, is definitely one of the much better books on this site, so you can expect this kind of quality to remain. Author has a stockpile of chaps for this novel, so you can expect the update stability to remain stable. Reading just these 13 chaps alone, you won’t regret. Looking forward for what’s to come ;)
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