Review Detail of Kw0z in Valkyrie Smash

Layios:To me, it doesn't feel wrong for MC acting like that, we even got few other people who did the same as the MC but ended up punished. He also had the guts to do it 'cause he has acces to the system thing where he could edit the report. As for Nine behaviors, it's more like a child curiosity that led her to spy on them, since she was curious, she spied and asked Doctor why, how, and what is it.

Kw0z:It’s still weird that she enjoys watching other’s do it to me

Nomanalive:Just to be clear at that point Nine didn't know anything about what they were doing and as layios said she was just curious about what they were doing. I would say that situation was more like her watching an animal kingdom documentary than it is watching people getting it on. I won't say you're wrong for thinking it's wierd though. everyone are free to think what they want about the plot, that's just how reading works.

DaoistYz2Ici:will the character of the mc evolve? Because he looks like a third rate pervert especially the way he manipulates women's feelings and I hope he doesn't get ntred by Odin because since he created them he should have a way to control all his valkyries

DaoistYz2Ici:will the character of the mc evolve? Because he looks like a third rate pervert especially the way he manipulates women's feelings and I hope he doesn't get ntred by Odin because since he created them he should have a way to control all his valkyries

Lady_Phaena:It truly is a good concept but the male lead truly is trash. It would be nice if his character was truly the "cold and indifferent" person he portrayed himself to be and the book was a cool romance.

Kw0z:It’s still weird that she enjoys watching other’s do it to me

dao_of_truemagic:man have you watched po#n before.this is a serious question.

Nomanalive:I aspire to improve my writing so it's only natural that there will be character development (since it's one of the most essential parts of a story) And no, no NTR. NO!

Kw0z:It’s still weird that she enjoys watching other’s do it to me

Salmon_El_Solomon:I have a question, you watch adult videos? If your answer is yes or not it doesn't may,do you think a girl doesn't see? If you have a girlfriend or some girl who you can talk, ask her. It's the same, but a reality show. She only see it secretly, she doesn't joint and they don't know she is there.

JMC1508:Watching is a kink for some and it's not the worst kink there is. When someone sceam bloody pervert I narrow my eyes. Every human has some 'pervertions' but if it is not sexual then it is often worse. Asexual; frigid women or 'perfect' gentlemem I say RUN. And you if you're not a virgin then you sacre me.

JMC1508:Watching is a kink for some and it's not the worst kink there is. When someone sceam bloody pervert I narrow my eyes. Every human has some 'pervertions' but if it is not sexual then it is often worse. Asexual; frigid women or 'perfect' gentlemem I say RUN. And you if you're not a virgin then you sacre me.

jinmorifan_2:Don't try to justify voyeurism. Adults can defend their fetishes themselves.

JMC1508:I justify nothing kid I said if you have no sexual kinks you are a sociopath or worse a psychopath. Otherwise you are an hypocrite that pont fingers at other and secretly is the same or worse. I don't have voyeur kink and mine are rather vanilla (Lingerie for ex) but I don't judge unless its harmful to others (unrelated and innocents parties)

Layios:To me, it doesn't feel wrong for MC acting like that, we even got few other people who did the same as the MC but ended up punished. He also had the guts to do it 'cause he has acces to the system thing where he could edit the report. As for Nine behaviors, it's more like a child curiosity that led her to spy on them, since she was curious, she spied and asked Doctor why, how, and what is it.

Nomanalive:I aspire to improve my writing so it's only natural that there will be character development (since it's one of the most essential parts of a story) And no, no NTR. NO!