Review Detail of Phantomfiend in THIS TRANSMIGRATION SEEMS SOMEWHAT STRANGE...?

You should use the auxiliary chapter for prologue and delicacies. And start the story in the first chapter to make it look nice and tidy. This is quite a roller-coaster read for me. Not a LGBT fan. However, I still read it until chapter 5. Even though I have no experience in such concepts and stories, but I think it's not bad and is fine for reading. Well, it's actually pretty good.