Phantomfiend
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This story prioritizes survival, so romance is not be a central theme. However, as the plot unfolds and characters develop, there could be opportunities for connection (a slower burn romance), though it likely wouldn't be as prominent as stories in the romance genre. But for now, I can only say there isn't. I'm sorry.
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But their fear causes them to think simply. Stay and wait. Even though Zephyr's offer was tempting, how could they trust someone who looked like a thug? XD, Kkkkk. Unless they see clear evidence before their eyes that there is a safe place out there, they will not move. Apart from that, home factors also play a role in their decisions. They don't want to leave the place where they live, even though it has been destroyed or a terrible disaster has struck. Also, as you read this story, not everyone was reluctant to follow Zephyr in the end. As the story progresses, circumstances will make their responses different. But your comment may be correct. This goes against the law of averages.
I think the author really knows the topic of this story very well. He made it neat and nice. As long as I read, I was lost in comfort. There is nothing distracting in the style and structure of the writing. I just focused on how the story would unfold. But..., Yeah. The pace is quite slow I think. That's fine. Nothing's wrong with it.
You use too much Onomatopoeia. In one chapter, 3 to 5 are enough. That's the maximum amount. If there are too many, the reader's reading flow will be disrupted. Also, don't combine Onomatopoeia words in a sentence. That's not good writing. Let one Onomatopoeia word itself be on a separate line. Out of 5 chapters, chapter 4 was really uncomfortable to read. The structure is probably something I rarely or never see in other webnovels I've read. I suggest reading other similar webnovels to be able to imitate the writing style and structure.
A creeping fog of mystery engulfs the narrative from the very first page, refusing to let you breathe easy until the end. Don't be fooled by the slow burn; each meticulously crafted chapter lays the groundwork for future revelation that will leave you breathless. Immerse yourself in the suspense, and trust the deliberate pacing – it's a journey worth taking.
This webnovel is fascinating. I'm usually too picky when it comes to female leads. But from chapters 1 to 5, I felt comfortable and relaxed while read it without being distracted by anything. The writing is good and the pace of the story is not messy. I recommend this. This is a webnovel with a good female lead.