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It’s ok. A bit of broken English, weird sentence structures, and dialogue. Everything kinda comes off as if it was written by a child, or someone who has no idea what they’re talking about, and are just repeating what they heard. MC gives off MAJOR white knight energy, so that’s a turn off. I hope it doesn’t continue. I’m interested in the premise however, so I’ll continue to read.