Review Detail of larrythecableguy in The Whole World Was Watching, But I Forgot It Was A Game!

Very interesting concept, have been looking for a novel like this since 'Legendary Mechanic' and I hope this work gets picked up so I can support it and the great author! However this is a very small excert of what seems to be a massive story, so anything can happen when considering writing quality, world building and character development. We can just hope this gets picked and supported properly.