It’s a trope that can certainly be used well if targeted and played out good enough. The grammar is good, with only a few mistakes I could notice. I haven’t read any major fights to see how well the author deals with challenging scenes but with how it’s played out so far, it’s not bad. The opening wasn’t as mind blowing as others I’ve read, but not the worst. So far, the story seems pretty generic with clunky dialogue at many instances. With a little sharpening around the edges, and a little more thought put in, I’m sure there can be a lot this book has to offer.
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