webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of FennrrirX in One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Review detail

FennrrirX
FennrrirXLv51yrFennrrirX

The novel is okay so far (Chapter10). It would be 1.000 times better if it wasn't for the 300-500 word chapters. The character design is great (5 stars), world background seems good (4 stars) but there is not enough story yet to be sure, the only thing that brings it down is that the chapters are so short that the setup for the story is going to take at least 15 chapters and the updates aren't frequent enough to counter balance the small size of the chapters.

altalt

One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Hit30

Liked by 8 people

LIKE

Replies1

Hit30
Hit30AuthorHit30

don't worry chapters will not be less then 1000 words in from now on