Review Detail of WinterTimeCrime in THE CEO AND HIS LITTLE ANGEL

The story had a decent flow, and the dialogue was believable. POV made all of the situations Anastasia gets into. A few of your first chapters have some grammatical errors and typos, but those can be easily fixed in the proofreading process. Another point, using identifiers like 'said' and 'asked' can get a bit bland and repetitive; I suggest pairing a character's voice with a specific action, how they look, tone, etc. Keep writing, all the best.