Review Detail of Cosray8d in Exploring the World of To Love Ru

This fic desperately needs a rewrite. The concept of a gamer in the To-Love-Ru world is interesting but cultivation is hard to understand in the best case and complete bullsh*t in the worst case. Mc doesn't even show how he trains and cultivates, making the whole system meaningless. Borrowing a system and explicitly stating its from someone else is just lazy. Then there's the gacha - very few manage to use it in a good way but here it was just used to introduce a character of Fate that gets more screen time than any To-Love-Ru characters in this story and it has 0 consequences beyond adding another waifu to a harem world that is already bursting with the number of love interests. The writing quality is mediocre but the constant use of "kinda" is infuriating. The Mc is basically a trap (because his adoptive mom said long hair looks good on him) - if you're into that good for you. But all the characters constantly saying he looks like a girl/trap gets annoying really quick. For me it was the least glaring problem in this fic. I stopped around chapter 25 because some reviews indicated that it gets better but I could endure only that much.