Astolfo best girl confirmed

Definitely the female version of Sasuke!

But Gary does

Wonder what happened to Ash...

Couldn't Robin create hands that can use the fingerpistol? (on weaker enemies and near stronger ones)

The first time the shock is understandable but I hope Mc doesn't act that way in the future.

Mc not talking with the robber is a redeeming trait! The way he dealt with him so far isn't all that bad considering he was ambushed. If he takes this as a learning experience and is more vigilant in the future then perfect.

This fic is basically a sociopathic Gary Stu hunting for waifus and make them as strong as possible while being a fighting maniac. It's very well written and for a harem fic with so many waifus it's girls are also mostly well established and characterized. The only problem I have is the end of Orochimaru and what happened with Guren and this Yuki girl from Oto because they apparently were forgotten.

This is a fairly well written fic - however with a spineless Mc without any goals beyond becoming the pinnacle of this world. He's like a polite, way less perverted issei without ambition and with low self esteem. The only reason he actually gets stronger is because it's expected of him. His real goal is to be a side character for the main cast and if he's lucky and pitiful enough to sleep with some of the female cast. He has an extremely Op fruit but instead of utilizing it for magic to its fullest potential he instead prefers to be a meat head close ranged fighter simply because it feels cooler. The only one who regularly sleeps with him took pity on him and due to a curse and is really easy to satisfy. Half of the crew abandoned him because he is too much of a coward to deviate from canon and stagnate. And now he's with the canon crew to "become stronger" only to still be held by the hand of the few fate characters who took pity on him making his growth even slower. He basically tells everyone who he wants to f*ck 9/10 of his secrets,background and powers immediately. However there are (very few) signs that he will eventually get better.

Nah he just cockblocked himself. . . Again!

Why does he explain his powers? That's just as stupid as talking mid fight.. .oh wait!

And even her affection can be attributed to her curse.

Who could have guessed ... At this point MC should just let her do her thing and ignore her completely. Though she would probably ruin his goals in the process and backstab him at the earliest opportunity under the guise of friendship. She never cared for the Mc beyond his meta knowledge and his mana.

And that's the problem! Mc doesn't have a real goal. He's just an Otaku way over his head.

No he really didn't. Otherwise he would have at least tried to dodge.

This battle is a symptom of most the character flaws Mc has. He was half assed, arrogant, noble and stupid. He wanted to "test" himself although he knew of Luffys canon arsenal and strength. Instead he just let himself get hit like an idiot without utilizing any magic beyond barriers. WTF does he even have that fruit if he doesn't use magic? And what is the point of parting ways with half of the crew? He will still be handheld and his growth will grow stagnant while at the same time his "captain" is whoring herself out and the others couldn't care less. Only the doctor has a legitimate reason to part ways with the Mc. And what's the point of joining the crew with his waifu constantly watching over his shoulders? He won't go the harem route but still goes the harem route only for him to cockblock himself and so on. This Mc is like a tamer and polite version of issei with 0 resolve, dignity and backbone. He wanted an adventure only to make himself the sidecharacter. He went from wanting a harem to only wanting 1 girl who he can never fully have to still wanting a harem only to make himself a pitiful excuse of a slave owner whose only "slave" who sleeps with him uses him as a sextoy in a new environment where he lost face and is seen like a looser. He has no initiative and can't think for himself. He's honestly just a disappointment from a readers perspective because you constantly root for him to finally make himself stand out or gain a goal beyond the "one piece" only to find out that he's just an Otaku who couldn't measure up to his own dreams.

Ah the first steps of brainwashing and turning an enemy into a devoted servant... Now that he has a willing tester he can experiment which lasting effects his room can have on someone. Maybe he can make her stronger, gain new abilities, unlock potential and most importantly keep her lactation out of the room too. She could even become a devoted helper to maximize the milk output from his next projects... BTW Kala was always the best from the trio imo.

This fic desperately needs a rewrite. The concept of a gamer in the To-Love-Ru world is interesting but cultivation is hard to understand in the best case and complete bullsh*t in the worst case. Mc doesn't even show how he trains and cultivates, making the whole system meaningless. Borrowing a system and explicitly stating its from someone else is just lazy. Then there's the gacha - very few manage to use it in a good way but here it was just used to introduce a character of Fate that gets more screen time than any To-Love-Ru characters in this story and it has 0 consequences beyond adding another waifu to a harem world that is already bursting with the number of love interests. The writing quality is mediocre but the constant use of "kinda" is infuriating. The Mc is basically a trap (because his adoptive mom said long hair looks good on him) - if you're into that good for you. But all the characters constantly saying he looks like a girl/trap gets annoying really quick. For me it was the least glaring problem in this fic. I stopped around chapter 25 because some reviews indicated that it gets better but I could endure only that much.

I'm confused... Does he know of the villain or not? Those are some mixed messages MCs mind is sending here.