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Lee_Cole_7112
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as at chapter 554;the book is good,very similar to the imbecile lord is married to seven goddesses. but the writing quality is a bit off because in between chapter 200-400, I noticed the dialogues lack the personal touch of the author, and then there's the system points, the MC should be able to directly level up to the sixth order at least with all the points collected even if levelling up requires more points, the issue of the MC not levelling up too fast for whatsoever reason is pointless because he should have already attracted the attention of the main continent with his acts. I understand all that about foreign policy and interests but by now the main continent should already feel the threat posed by such a quickly emerging power, after all it's impossible for the main continent to lack interest in other continents. The romance is slow asf. if the MC only acts on interests not on the good or bad, why the hesitation on the harem especially mothers of the harem if they're willing and the daughters have no issue. Then on Amber, in the beginning there was some development between her and the MC then the author seemingly forgot about it till the latest chapters. there are other editting errors that confuse and misinform but can be ignored but overall it's a good read.

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Srujan_20
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Is Mc still leveling up slowly even after 500+ ch?