Review Detail of saske_uchi in Dragon Monarch System

If you don't mind I would suggest you to change the name of MC. It's been hectic reading an Indian name as we have been reading lots of Chinese or short English names.. It's just relating or i would say immersing into novel with that name is making it hard with that name It's a very small work it would be great if you can make it happen. Do work on changing Chapter one grammar a bit, try using grammerly. All the best for the novel.