Review Detail of netrics07 in My throne

The intriguing plot and seemingly colorful characters are bogged down by grammatical and spelling errors, incorrect prepositions and the choice of not using quotation marks for speech. There are a lot of things to improve, but the potential of a great story is already there. Also, as a personal opinion, Webnovel likes their stories more in the "novel"-like style of writing, so you may want to consider that. Best of luck to you, Author!