Review Detail of Bossatron546 in Fallout Wastelander

Item: Fallout Wastelander
Rating: 3

Review detail

Bossatron546Lv21yrBossatron546

I personally do not read stories where the first chapter does not catch my interest but that's just me. idk if all the chapters are like the first but it might be a good idea to slowly rewrite the beginning chapters in a better format as you get more experienced

Fallout Wastelander

PowerArmorGuy

Liked it!

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Bossatron546Lv2Bossatron546

forgot to say that it's really great to see fallout fics and that I don't mean anything I said to be insulting I just have trouble forcing myself to get through chapters I'm sure it gets better in the later chapters just my OCD acting up

1yr

PowerArmorGuyAuthorPowerArmorGuy

I mean your review doesn't really say much other than it didn't catch your interest I don't really see a need to rewrite a section of my fic right now just because some random reader passing by couldn't explain what was wrong with it or needed to be improved.

1yr