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Review Detail of _BLACK in True King's Ecstasy

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_BLACK
_BLACKLv41yr_BLACK

the most infuriating thing about this novel is that Mc was 24 and successful man before réincarnation but after when he is reincarnated he doesn't act like he is 24 and even worse his sisters that are 10 and his friends that is 4 look to him hot when he is 24 that's creepy he should be looking at them like they are children it's sad novel look promising but I hate author that don't pay attention to crucial details especially when it's harem

True King's Ecstasy

ElectricLuna

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Taboo_Stories
Taboo_StoriesLv2Taboo_Stories

Maybe the author is lolicon?

_BLACK:yooo I'm telling you he is mentally 24 that mean in his head he is 24 and the girls are 4 and 10 I don't know about you but when I was 4 or 10 I was only thinking about playing the problem is not that I'm angry about if it's right or wrong I'm angry because author know he created mc that has 24 but in the first chapter its like he forget and make mc move like not logical 24 if you know what I mean if it happened in the middle of novel I can understand there lot of information and author maybe forget but first chapters and the main idea the author start with and he forget mc age that's to much
ElectricLuna
ElectricLunaAuthorElectricLuna

Thanks for the review, I'll try to make it better💖

Chris_Thompson_5673
Chris_Thompson_5673Lv2Chris_Thompson_5673

give author a break I'm enjoying the novel so far and besides this is his first book after all

_BLACK
_BLACKLv4_BLACK

the problem is I understand that author is new but at least the thing you start with is correct tell me how you forget in the first chapters that the mc you created is 24 if it happened in 50 chapters and author forget something it's okay because there's lot to think of but on the first chapters and it's the first idea it's unacceptable also you need to be sometimes harsh for the new author to understand and improve next time when he make new novel all this harsh comment help him to not forget at least the core ideas of his novel need to be okay

Chris_Thompson_5673:give author a break I'm enjoying the novel so far and besides this is his first book after all
ZessDragneel
ZessDragneelLv13ZessDragneel

well thats a nice constructive criticism.... had to find PPL like u in this place as most will just write gibberish and curse at the author without any good reason...

_BLACK:the problem is I understand that author is new but at least the thing you start with is correct tell me how you forget in the first chapters that the mc you created is 24 if it happened in 50 chapters and author forget something it's okay because there's lot to think of but on the first chapters and it's the first idea it's unacceptable also you need to be sometimes harsh for the new author to understand and improve next time when he make new novel all this harsh comment help him to not forget at least the core ideas of his novel need to be okay
lorca136
lorca136Lv13lorca136

I haven't read it yet but based on this complaint I'd say, it's not unreasonable for someone who has reincarnated into a child's body to view other children as attractive. attraction is part psychology part physiology. it would actually be stranger in my opinion of no confusion or changes happened . also plenty of young people find people close to their own age attractive despite being fully aware that more mature people exist. jobless reincarnation actually uses the same general idea and yah it got the same complaints but my point is it got a second season and likely a third on the way despite being shown to a much larger audience so clearly its not a deal breaker. thus the author should continue the book as is if they like.

_BLACK
_BLACKLv4_BLACK

yooo I'm telling you he is mentally 24 that mean in his head he is 24 and the girls are 4 and 10 I don't know about you but when I was 4 or 10 I was only thinking about playing the problem is not that I'm angry about if it's right or wrong I'm angry because author know he created mc that has 24 but in the first chapter its like he forget and make mc move like not logical 24 if you know what I mean if it happened in the middle of novel I can understand there lot of information and author maybe forget but first chapters and the main idea the author start with and he forget mc age that's to much

lorca136:I haven't read it yet but based on this complaint I'd say, it's not unreasonable for someone who has reincarnated into a child's body to view other children as attractive. attraction is part psychology part physiology. it would actually be stranger in my opinion of no confusion or changes happened . also plenty of young people find people close to their own age attractive despite being fully aware that more mature people exist. jobless reincarnation actually uses the same general idea and yah it got the same complaints but my point is it got a second season and likely a third on the way despite being shown to a much larger audience so clearly its not a deal breaker. thus the author should continue the book as is if they like.
Schaar3811
Schaar3811Lv3Schaar3811

well don't know bout mc but I as one will simply just ignore my past life, can't understand how MCs remember past life, I can't remember a novel's plot I just switch from

_BLACK
_BLACKLv4_BLACK

yeah but you forget how old you were or how you act as your age suddenly no this things happen slowly

Schaar3811:well don't know bout mc but I as one will simply just ignore my past life, can't understand how MCs remember past life, I can't remember a novel's plot I just switch from
Schaar3811
Schaar3811Lv3Schaar3811

Yeah but it's just that the mc is having sexual thoughts for said children is the problem like his 24 old persona would surely affect his view of his romantic partners also it ain't a normal case you can apply normal psychology to (well if he got that stuff cleared the drama of the older mind in younger body stuff it may be possible to have fragments from both his memories to build a new persona with adult experience and maturity with a childlike perception, well science surely ain't accommodating of this stuff, so I for one just ignore science and common sense and read stuff like this taking it seriously will make my already poor willpower die) Even my lewd thoughts of that stage of mind were limited to cuddling maybe due to lack of maturity or knowledge or whatecer

lorca136:I haven't read it yet but based on this complaint I'd say, it's not unreasonable for someone who has reincarnated into a child's body to view other children as attractive. attraction is part psychology part physiology. it would actually be stranger in my opinion of no confusion or changes happened . also plenty of young people find people close to their own age attractive despite being fully aware that more mature people exist. jobless reincarnation actually uses the same general idea and yah it got the same complaints but my point is it got a second season and likely a third on the way despite being shown to a much larger audience so clearly its not a deal breaker. thus the author should continue the book as is if they like.
clenchurCheeks
clenchurCheeksLv12clenchurCheeks

whole lotta nonces in this comment section

Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv12Eternal_Shu

Author luna are u taking a break??

ElectricLuna:Thanks for the review, I'll try to make it better💖
ElectricLuna
ElectricLunaAuthorElectricLuna

Yeah, I'm thinking of finishing the whole story before going for the daily updates again, so I took a one-month break, but will soon update the whole story again.

Eternal_Shu:Author luna are u taking a break??