ngl the dreamscape bores me, i skipped the last chapters where he went there

my friend, you are good at what you do keep it up

* SPOILERS can you tell me if solus actually manages to get with Lith even after he married Kamila please

can someone tell me if after marrying Kamila he still allows solus in the relationship or does she find someone else? I felt the proposal was too abrupt and was just an easy way for Lith to get another power up ... after all the build up with solus the sudden "go find someone else" attitude from Lith left a bad taste in my mouth

sorry but none of this makes sense. the grammar makes it harder to understand on top of that

she's 18 but has the mental capacity of a 6 year old....

okay I'm out

thanks for the infrormation. guess iIwont be reading

If this attitude of the MC stays then I'll stop reading. There's no reason for him to adopt his predecessors attitude

this isn't harem. Far from it. MC only has one girlfriend and she is barely shown in the later chapters. There's other girls interested in him but only one get attention from him in the form of rescuing her (damsel in distress) multiple times with no pay off. It's pretty much just the teasing anime type stuff where you get misled thinking "is it finally happening" but no the MC acts slightly dense (up until the late 1000's chapters where he acknowledges that the girl has feelings for him but doesn't actually respond to those feelings). Other than that I did really enjoy the story. That being said it's pretty much constant action after chapter 750. No real character development from anyone, not that there was much in the first place. MC attitude has just changed along with other characters. A lot of asspulls tho

whole lotta nonces in this comment section

There is no reason why the MC should be behaving like a child. And frankly, it's putting me off. I understand that this is your first work author but the Mac's behaviour needs to be changed or just toned down.... A lot

did you find out later on?

why didn't the blood help and why didn't the mother and daughter get mentioned

yh I agree. the "development" of the story is essentially "let's see if Riley is gonna beat his record for the amount of people he kills for seemingly no reason" and then rinse and repeat. I'm interested in the characters but Riley is pretty bland. He gets growth with "her" but then it's too quick to then go right back to the start

I had to drop this man at "clone" incident followed by a bunch of killing. I just got tired of the killing. It was still a good read but at this far into the story I just got tired with how unpredictable he is. I want to keep reading but I know that he'll just continue doing the same stuff over and over again

wth man what's wrong with you

you people are weird man

I feel like the dialogue is a bit awkward. the women act like new born children sort of. just some feedback