The story has lots of potential, i like the way it first lets us know about the world and its background and gives us context about the kingdoms and their relations. one thing i think could be worked on a big is grammar, there are places where different words replace ones that the author actually meant to use. this is an easy fix via getting an editor or double checking. but anyways good book and great beginning looking forward to seeing where Alex goes
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