Review Detail of Fickle_as_light in Madara in the Avatar World

This is a rare book with good writing in this platform. and in my honest opinion author you shoud paractise your writing with fan fics till you are comfortable and then make a original book because in some places during reading i felt like your writing is getting constricted by the og plotline and og world building and i would love to read a original work from you cuz your writing style is intresting man. For those people coming in and reading this be aware that this is not a multiverse fic so there is no op madara steamrolling the avatar world in 50 chapters{like come on guys at some points i also felt frustrated cuz i felt madara geting beaten there was wierd but just think of this as a madara partial template user in avatar world he doesnt have powers that can break world laws and anhilate verything} and i am waiting for original by you author, man i like the stories writen by good fan fic authors cuz they are intresting most of the times. over all good job. . . . . . . . . . . . . ok all good things and proper done now time to release the irational frustration after seing madara geting beaten by some fire nation dancers