Review Detail of jaro_onody in Madara in the Avatar World

Item: Madara in the Avatar World
Rating: 4

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jaro_onodyLv31yrjaro_onody

1the story is going kind of slow but the premises is real good 2mc is okay I guess, don't really know-how you manage to downgrade his tajustu so much ,my man Madara took down an entire army platoon on his own, even as a child he already was a killing machine and took down a Senju squads on his own without mangekyou , man that downgrade hurt my soul for that along minus 1 star for quality 3 also you seem to have the tendency to explain things twice like in the first couple chapters but at least you not asking for Patreon donation so its oke keep up the hard work

Madara in the Avatar World

KojiSan

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Lol_2050Lv14Lol_2050

It was already stated that he isn’t comfortable with his new body, so his taijutsu isn’t at 100%.

1yr

VeelaLv14Veela

Bruh. He is a child and cant fully use his techniques due to his size and limb length. He states this

1yr

Kono_phineas_daLv2Kono_phineas_da

I fee like this is logically correct but for madara uchiha this wouldn’t matter much at all he was literally in wars since he was a CHILD so for him to be able to not fully use his techiniques due to size and limb length wouldn’t really matter he would already know how to optimally fight as a kid

Veela:Bruh. He is a child and cant fully use his techniques due to his size and limb length. He states this
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1yr

Kono_phineas_daLv2Kono_phineas_da

Bro what are you talking about honestly his taijutsu isn’t as low as you make it out to be

1yr

Lol_2050Lv14Lol_2050

But the mc isn’t THE madara uchiha.

Kono_phineas_da:I fee like this is logically correct but for madara uchiha this wouldn’t matter much at all he was literally in wars since he was a CHILD so for him to be able to not fully use his techiniques due to size and limb length wouldn’t really matter he would already know how to optimally fight as a kid

1yr