Review Detail of auroraRMC in Login Before Others: Stone Age

probably one of the most disappointing stories on here. the synopsis makes it sound fun and exciting, and there’s the whole buildup to when the aliens start merging, but the story stops literally before anything starts happening. we basically just read a prologue. translations are almost as bad as non-straight up MTL can get. pronouns rarely accurate, often mistranslated phrases that make no sense. dodge if you can.