Review Detail of bibiyenini in Tales Of A Supreme Lord

I have been giving reviews for a lot of books, and I've been thoroughly honest with it. I have to say a lot of things, but not to the point you have to scrape off everything and start from scratch. First, your title. It's vague. It's capitalized, so the readers will find a hard time finding the book because it isn't in lowercase. Webnovel caters titles with an overview of what the novel is about, and your title gives off a TINY intriguing factor. It is necessary for authors to write the novel with a powerful title at start. Try showing off what you have in store. Think outside the box. What if the title had a 'Vampire' and 'Prophecy' combined in it? What if the title has a Lord or a fantasy element on it that will surely bait the readers to read your book from start to end? Make sure it's decent. Something that the readers will remember for a long time. Second, your synopsis. It needed a lot of re-organization. I'm nothing against with the content, but the structure can be paraphrased. The sentences can be arranged to a general-specific sequence. Try to unravel a wide plot point to the start, and narrow it down to the core. You should set examples from the popular books on how they write their synopsis. Make sure to follow a certain format, or don't be afraid to copy a writing style (don't copy the content, just the style!) Third, the cover. It isn't good looking at the thumbnail. It looked meh on me, Try to find pictures in Pinterest, something that is interesting and eye-catchy. If you are invested to make the novel good and not just farming MGS, make sure you find enough time to pursue having a good cover and content. Fourth, the first chapter is pulling in, but the sentences needed to be reorganized, You used a lot of 'He' in the first sentence. Your always starting the sentence with the subject. Try using another word for it not to be redundant. Redundancy was making the flow rough and the readers might drop it halfway, Best descriptions are the way to the reader's heart. So that's all of the things I've seen through your novel. Best of luck!