Review Detail of The_WindChaser in Blazing Swordsman

The writing quality is good, it only needs more time for editing. I saw some typos and a few errors here and there, but besides that, I could imagine the scenes vividly with how you describe it. Also, in a first POV, I suggest removing the words, "I thought" and that stuff because we are already inside the character's head in a first POV. The story development is nice, it explains the scenes/what the characters are currently doing with little to no excess words. Character design is good as well. Although I got confused, I was able to understand the character's personalities. The world background is somewhat fuzzy but it gave a clear explanation about the rules of magic in their world, so good job on that. Lastly, try to edit as much as you can before publishing a chapter. Remember, quality is better than quantity (for me). That's all and good luck!