The grammar is good, you can read every chapter good without any problems, the story is nice, it has a good pace too, I like that like the minor ranks are more skipped, like "after 4 months training...", and not like some novels which are so slow paced. 1 update per day is great, could be moređ Overall a great novel PS: Extra points that you have a mc which wasnt a weeb or a total looser, that makes it so much better
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