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XD, I might use it more often in the revamp as it's a genuine excuse with dragons.
I'll take that into consideration for the remastery I'm doing.
Unless you count the fact he starving for nearly a month XD
I believe he's refering to the speed of a horse
OMG, this is why I love webnovel XD, this thread is hilarious.
I swear... I worry for the human race seeing comments like this. Sometimes I think people have rocks for brains.
Still, you should have stated that it was Toby under a new name. I understand you are a rookie so I'm letting ya off but still, try to think of the readers a bit.
Writing Quality: 5/5 Stability of updates: ~2/5 Story Dev: 4/5 Character Design: 4/5 World Background: ~4/5 Average: 3.6 Remarks: I love this book, but I absolutely hate that MLB simply doesn't have the time to continue it. Over the past 2 months, updates have been getting more and more unstable to the point we've been several days without updates now. I'm not sure what's going on whether he's been burnt out, or is busy with real life, but it's a shame. Furthermore, he's practically discontinued Cultivation Online at this point, which is another shame. Despite the world's relatively simplistic background, the characters and plot development are really good. I've grown attached to the characters, and I'm intrigued by the plot. I like the power scale of things with 1st order spells, 2nd order spells, and so on. I'm also curious about the backstory of a certain ghost and eagerly looking forward to finding out. I'm gonna take a break from reading this and come back after the new year, hopefully, by then everything will be sorted out... if not, oh well.
Think of it like this, when a level 1 player in a game kills a standard level 5 monster, does he/she immediately become level 5? No. Usually, they jump to level 3 or 4. Hence, heavenly lightning saint core instead of divine lightning saint core.
There from higher worlds, what do you expect?
Your right. To awaken heavenly lightning one has to absorb divine lightning, to awaken divine lightning he has to absorb astral lightning and so on. Something i'm never gonna get into as i'm creating a new book.
Given the difference in strength between them it's actually pretty surprising.
Yeah i meant for it to be a heavenly lightning saint core, sorry.
His name was originally Alex.
Dragons have a good sense of smell.