Review Detail of PsydeON in Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory