I have high expectations for this story, and being rare Chronicle fic is a plus. However, I disagree with MC's decision. 1) He has the choice to save or kill Andrew's dad and decided the killing is a better option. I get that he's a bad person, but I think trying to get him therapy 1st might be a better option than just outright killing him. 2) This is what makes me drop. MC somehow decided to tell others that they are fictional characters. This is a red flag to many readers, I include. Have seen a lot of readers drop stories just for this alone. This is a warning to others who wanna read this story. If you're fine with the things I mention, you might enjoy this, but if not well at least I'm warning you.
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LIKEOther member, but there nothing stop him from telling his verse now since he just casually told other member they are fictional character
Stressed_Ultra:Others as in like people in his Verse or the other members?
JRZTT1246:Other member, but there nothing stop him from telling his verse now since he just casually told other member they are fictional character
There one fanfic I read where in the mcs original universe Spider-Man existed but was fictional. Like spiderman was fictional for his universe without saying spiderman himself is fiction.
Khalderas:I never understood why authors go with the fiction route, is it that hard to say that the multiverse is real and that everything is possible? no, you have to demean their existence as mere works of fiction