I think aside from when someone replied my comment or read story I library, I rarely read new story on this site anymore unless novelupdate brought me here. XD I think the mod of this site should make it possible to untag what reader don't like, mention it in forum but never get notice.

BTW, is there any example that MC is not edgy, obsess with revenge type? Asking after seeing second coming of gluttony, and ofc the fate villain one as well. I think I only known this 2, but these 2 are very edgy imo, and normally I skip that. Lately, I don't read story on this site unless I screen it from Novelupdate anymore since I can't untag in search.

I didn't read most of that aside I'm fate villain and I don't think it's good IMO. The female, no I think every other cast aside from MC are very, very stupid. No insult intent here.

So... I can't judge Harem because I'm gay? Give me a slid reason aside from that and we'll talk. All my reason why I hate it are all display in comment, and it has nothing to do with my sexuality. I can enjoy a good story just fine as long as character have good development, which is a rarely in Harem setting. Give me 1 good story in Harem setting where MC, and the girl got a good development, changing themselves to be better than the start and not just a trophy where MC got all girl to be consider a good harem.

But they can decided what is a good story, and majority of Harem never develop character properly. Each girl are just certain archetype like Yandere, Tsundere, Kuudere, or worst his own sister, and etc. And only a few chapter past and they fell over he for MC who barely have to do anything to earn it. And I read Harem, for po*n that is. Since there is no plot and who care for plot in that. It seem you never read my old comment why I dislike harem, but judge me immediately once you know I am gay. All my comment toward Harem are focus on character, not because of my sexuality. Unless you can give me a really good harem, which MC and each girl develop as character and not as in, This is good because MC not indecisive and get all girl type then gave me an example. I'll read it and see how it go from there.

I judge harem because they don't develop character properly. They just there to be MC trophy and glorify how good he is. The only Harem I like is po*n, because I don't watch it for plot. I can read anything just fine as long as they have good character development. But that's is rarity in Harem. Most people who said Harem is good are mostly who know the ending where MC get all girl and not indecisive or chose 1 girl thing. But that has nothing to do with the characters themselves. If you saying that, then what about other male who dislike Harem? Are they all gay? No insult intent here, but please leave my sexuality out of this. I have a reason to dislike harem, and it's not because my sexuality. I use to believe I like Harem in the past. But I realized later as I grown up that I only like it because at least my favorite girl get a chance to be with MC.

No insult intent but I'm gay but I don't feel offense toward the word 'gay' or 'You're a man who like women'. Maybe I'm a tolerate person. But I just laugh at it if someone say that to me. Or If someone say gay I'd replied yes, I'm. XD Though, if they said it as 'You're a man, you suppose to like women,' that might sting a bit especially if that come out of someone you close with.

So Kyle is his 1st name, pls change character name to Viktor Kyle instead of Kyle Viktor. One Piece name use Last Name before First, not other way around even in Dub. Monkey D. Luffy, Roronoa Zoro, Nico Robin. What make it worst is that every character in OP world treat it as normal when everyone else use other system. Like calling him Kyle as if it was his 1st name when they should misunderstand it as his last name. Sorry, this is my nitpicking for years. IDK why OP OC writer keep forget this rule.

Is it Kimimaro level?

you have some ball, I'll give you that XD

Oops forget to add, at that time, Nie Lie was never train or master power of Law. He know of it but that the extend of it if I remember correctly.

I never hate Fantasy because it's not realistic, but the suspension of disbelief. That's 2 different thing. It's like hey this chit work but no one in the world ever think of it except MC and everyone act like OMG he genius. To make it more believable is, they know but hiding that info till MC expose it and therefore make enemy out of organization. That's what I mean. OFC there are exception like those who use modern knowledge like science mix with magic but most fantasy setting never thought of science so that could work. That's just 1 example. For me, to help that girl with Law power Nie lie somehow can thing of the method to help her when she who master the law itself couldn't. Am I suppose to believe that?

Sorry for another complaint, this is Chinese not JP. It's better if you keep this a bit down.

I preferred you don't put character from other fandom into this fic though. Now since you add one, there will be more. Then people will have to keep track, who is who. I remember someone else fic done this to the point that author themselves can't track where are they coming from anymore or just lost that character because they add too many character.

Don't say that about your mom :P

It didn't matter though even she's better though, in Nie Lie heart, the one he love the most is FML. I may not like him much but I respect him for that.

For me because he know so much than everyone in City. No expert in that world can even compare to him when it come to knowledge. Are you saying that his time in Future really make him specialize in all thing better than those who specialize in it. Even someone outside don't remember her name who has law power or something recognize his profound knowledge when he somehow cure her and I was in disbelieve, even someone who should be more knowledgeable than him state that. And then there are Harem aspect. but we didn't talk about that :P. It's been age since I dropped it so I don't remember much. I don't hate Nie Lie, but I hate how story make him know everything somehow.

So weak, so weak How dare you lol XD JK JK

I hope due to this experience he learn not to be arrogant young master because he has logia power. I'd be really disappoint if this turn to one. Many Xianxia story give MC powerful cheat so fast that he become exactly what he fight against, arrogant young master. It's like reading story from YM perspective, with his power he can bully everyone he dislike. Anyone get close to his Harem? Kill. They insult me, make me lost face? Kill.

Yeah I hate it when Haki introduce so much. In the past, to hurt logia you need strategic or luck. Croc is water and Enel is rubber. I preferred they figured the way to hurt their respective element than Haki against all. Now Logia lost the position it once was because Haki made it no different from any type of Paramecia.