Review Detail of OVERKILL in EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
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good writing quality ,world background too much but I can't connect to it , it like mix of everything , wizard , Harry Potter style school ( with all hyped students ,teachers and a principal ). MC is also like Harry Potter [ adopted , mean sibling and mother and a father ( who won't let MC die from bullying , but not home to stop the bully ) ]. MC is a magus. but............ .... . .... . MC is also a regressor ( who travelled back to past ) . MC has system . . . .. . . MC is Dracula .. . . . . . . World suddenly started opening portals every where like solo leveling ...MC's bullying sister is a Vampire . . some how MC is considered a trash despite everyone knowing he is a magus and Dracula . he has lowest bloodline ?? . i think even normal humans are better than him ??? don't ask me why . are you guys confused ?!. well I'm . .... ...... i read almost 20 chapters and i think story didn't even started yet , chapters till now are all just empty hyping about MC's past greatness ,his tragedy and how he was considered weak somehow???. there is also hype about that HP school . it was boring
EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
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it was boring . i couldn't connect world or MC, i couldn't get the hype i usually have for a system , a time traveller , a magus , a Dracula and all other races you could imagine . and when portals appeared I just dropped it . there was no story to mention in all those chapters . i think if you ruined it from the start then there is no point on going further .
there is more than 150 reviews on this book and almost all of them are 5 star , i thought there couldn't be so much spamming so this book must be really good. so i started it and keep going for until those portals . when I started writing review about i thought i should give it 3 star because i couldn't find any fault until i started writing them .. it was so boring that i almost forgot about them. .... ..... ..... ... .. . there was another reason i couldn't find any review lower than 4 star . i just don't get it.
on second thought, everyone has their own tastes. for you it might be boring but for many it might be fun. Well, not everyone are the same, this is how the world flows and how web novel grows. There are million readers and all with different universe in them. Some likes a book the others don't... So be positive and search what you like. i am glad for your honest review. thank you