Review Detail of Dstep24 in I Became The Pope, Now What?

Item: I Became The Pope, Now What?
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

Dstep24Lv1511mthDstep24

Pretty good story nothing too cliche. My only complaint is the author does not know how to use past-tense words. It also seems like it only bothers me don't see any other complaints about it.

I Became The Pope, Now What?

MisterImmortal

Liked it!

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Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551Lv4Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551

I just want to ask has he become pope now ?

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MisterImmortalAuthorMisterImmortal

Can you give an example so I can improve?

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