Review Detail of XavierE in I Became The Pope, Now What?

Pretty darn decent. 8/10 --mini review--no spoilers-- Grammar is good - very minor mistakes Story is unique enough - the mc didnt start of as the pope as i thought initially for which i am glad. the progression can be on the faster side but for this story it is understandable. if i had to give a suggestion it would be to slow down the pace a bit and develop your characters a bit more @authorsan characters can be worked on - they aren't bland, but nor are they unique enough to differentiate themselves. even if they are to die sometime in the future, a bit more focus on their story would be great. world building is good - a bit confusing if you arent paying attention, but its logical enough and thought out enough for where the story is at as of now.