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Okay by means of review, I'd definitely say an honest review about this book. I've got 5 things to say about it. First, the title. When you are publishing a book in Webnovel, make sure the title hit the market i.e., be concise of what the novel is about. I get the point of Erica being a demigod or all, but you could have opt to have a more attractive and eye-catcher title. Webnovel market is not really going to move in if it has an indefinite title. Remember, title is the first thing readers see. Second, the cover. In line with the title, you have to also be careful with making your cover more attractive than it was. You shouldn't go to the mediocre and deal with the content later. Webnovel doesn't want surprises at the end, they want it from the start. Third, the synopsis. I understand what you meant in the synopsis, and all of the theme inside the plot, but please refrain from saying the same thing over again. Repeating the same context might bore the readers out of the book and move on to a new one. Fourth, the capitalization, and punctuation. Usage of capitalization and punctuation are the supplemental things to make your execution smooth and wise-read. Readers tend to back out from the chapters if the execution isn't well and there are no sense of writing or neatness in it. Last, the first chapter seemed good but doesn't seemed that good [you know what I mean?]😬 it tells the story of Erica, yes, but it doesn't pull you in. This is where the power of showing more than telling in writing will go. Describe more of what the characters' are acting rather than telling the audience of what they are doing. That's a wrap up for my review. Remember, you are a precious writer. This is just based on my experience and everything I learned while writing every day. Good luck on your future endeavors!