Review Detail of Labraduble in Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
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I will say, much of the criticism about this arc is valid. For example, the bad time skips, leaving many unexplained aspects. And most importantly the nerf. In my opinion much of this story and its sucsess is predicated upon the fact that the mc is calculativ, smart and strong. And the fact that he sometimes makes stupid choices like this one with no considerations is tottaly out of charactor, and creates a paradox. This makes the story not make sense logic-wise. Hence it makes the reader feel stiffiled, irritated, becuase it feels as if you (the author) is forcing it, by bourdening the mc ( for something that is not so important, relatively speaking) and this makes it especially bad because since those who read this are rooting for the mc. I understand why some people might find it vexing reading him going through so much trouble when he could logically bully the entire world with his strength. You tried to justify the reason, (and i qoute" people make stupid mistakes"), but this is not good enough. Take this as a learning experience.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
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Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.[img=recommend]
VOID_:Thanks for the review, I'll keep in mind