Review Detail of Ignatious_Peter_2081 in The Villain's Story

Item: The Villain's Story
Rating: 4.2

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Ignatious_Peter_2081Lv21mthIgnatious_Peter_2081

Can you please talk about Aloaris' daughter? Was a part of her soul used to make Alan?(the mc-new being/3rd soul) Can you please reduce your hobby of using POV of many characters without continuation ? Sometimes the POV is of another character in the next chapter. Your grammar is improving. Thank God. Will Aloaris' daughter come back to life and fall for our mc? Can you tell in the novel more about Aranus and his life?( His love story included). Can I know more about Aloaris' daughter's life and death?( Her love story included).

The Villain's Story

Blazuku

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DefyingDemonLv11DefyingDemon

And he now got gravity affinity (high) why is it also missing.

Blazuku:Hi! thank you so much for the honest review. About your questions about Aloaris's daughter and Aranus, yes their relationship will be covered later on in the story. I will change my odd habit of the pov switches, and thank you for saying my grammar improved!

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BlazukuAuthorBlazuku

Hi! thank you so much for the honest review. About your questions about Aloaris's daughter and Aranus, yes their relationship will be covered later on in the story. I will change my odd habit of the pov switches, and thank you for saying my grammar improved!

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DefyingDemonLv11DefyingDemon

Why does Alan rank appare on his status when he looks at in in the later chapters ?

Blazuku:Hi! thank you so much for the honest review. About your questions about Aloaris's daughter and Aranus, yes their relationship will be covered later on in the story. I will change my odd habit of the pov switches, and thank you for saying my grammar improved!

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BlazukuAuthorBlazuku

ah, it's a sub affinity of the space element, I apologize if I missed mentioning it in a chapter where the stats were revealed.

DefyingDemon:And he now got gravity affinity (high) why is it also missing.

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BlazukuAuthorBlazuku

I decided to showcase it just to show the readers his exact strength in terms of the rank system

DefyingDemon:Why does Alan rank appare on his status when he looks at in in the later chapters ?

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