Also when there’s a pov change you don’t say who it is it gets confusing sometime we have to make split who it is though the text it would be easier if there was some [ ] explaining who it is

There some things in the story you don’t explain like when he gained Asta or whatever that is since it wasn’t explained not one bit. You tend to No explain the new things he gains after time skips

Has the romance started yet? Are the together yet

Also maybe a few arcs about where the celestial go after the leave the universe maybe the universe is just a small part of an outer universe with more powerful beings. Tbh I feel like there so much more you could do. I at least won’t a few arcs outside the universe where they go

The dumbest thing he can do is sell it. He can trade a couple maybe give it to a few friends. But sell it when he has so much money that even the sss rank headmaster thought so. I’d be disappointed if he sells it tbh

Why not more? Try to incorporate other planets/planes? Maybe a higher plane

She never regain her memories yet what are you talking about

I remember you said this is a late romance novel. I’m wondering when the romance aspect will start? Will it be after she evolves and gets a memories back?

I hope not I had unrequited loves that stick around being Annoying

And why is that?

*I though this one was going to be like that(typo)

I hope the fml is not weak then and has good potential. Tbh I hate fml who rely heavily on the mc. And can’t even follow the mc due to them behind week and needing to be saved etc. It would be better if she was also a dao domain cultivator maybe even one with a bloodline and a physiques.(hope it’s not yi min)

Not really. I just prefer reading novels with only 1fml. I though this no keep was going to be like that since you said that in the beginning but I was wrong.

Bro you’re all over the place. You’re saying no harem soulmate etc. but in some comments you’re saying there will be 2/3 in his harem. You’re also saying you planned for 1 girl who he’ll love and the other is complicated. Next you’re saying the harem will start late. Wtf is going on

Bro wtf happened to NO harem I believe in soulmate love? Was about to read it till I saw the comments. Change your Synopsis please your misleading people. Fans who want to read non harems who read the synopsis will buy your book thinking it’s a non harem because of it but it isn’t. Not everyone checks the comments because of spoilers

I’m not up to date so either I missed it or haven’t read it yet. Is it the privilege chapters?

What chapter?

Of xiao hei

Don’t you remember her memories were sealed until she reaches evolves into rare i think.

It depends if it’s always going to be like that and the Mc attitude