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xEnvy
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The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister... the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger... I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy. theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb. and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story... Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...

The Villain's Story

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there are also explanations in the novel for it too...

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Supreme_Slaughter
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Please try my new novel Protagonist Devourer ( There might be only one chapter but please help me point out and would love if you could introdue some things to add)